Friday, September 26, 2014

BR 2-02: Goldilocks and the Three Bears (Susanna Davidson, 2007)

"I' ll never, ever be naughty again!"
the girl said.

Review

This story is about a girl. I thought she looks like me, because I like naughty, too. But she is too naughty, so I like a little naughty. 

I thought people cannot stop somethings, if they feel really scary. And, they should do a lot of things, so they understand really scary things. I thought challenging is so important.

If I have a girl, the girl will be a naughty girl. So I say her "you should challenge a lot of things". I want to be like a mother.

This story was so interesting, and her mother would relieve because she stopped big naughty. And bear family is so cute!

[110 words]


Refence

Susanna Davidson. Goldilocks and the Three Bears. (2007). New York, America. Usborne House


BR 2-01: The RUNAWAY PANCAKE (Mairi Machinnon, 2006)


"I SAID, DON' T LET THEM CATCH ME!"
shouted the pancake.


Review

This story is about 'a pancake'. I like pancake, so the pancake looked good taste in this story. When I cook a pancake, I want to careful that the pancake run away.

I read this story for the first time, so I thought "who catch the pancake?" And I expected that some children catch it, but a pig caught it. So I thought a clever is favorable, and I want to be a clever person. Also I want to think some things so much, so I can catch the pancake!

I want to eat a pancake because I read this story, so I want to make a pancake in my house. But I cannot make it well, so I will do my best!!! 


[123 words]


Refence

Mairi Machinnon. The RUNAWAY PANCAKE. (2006). New York, America. Usborne House


Wednesday, September 24, 2014

My favorite places is my father' s office.

My favorite places is my father' s office, because the place is so comfortable. there are a sofa and a refrigerator, a table and PC. I think I can live in there, and there are many drinks and foods, so I always eat and drink them. There is a air conditioner in there, so I can sleep to relax.

[59 words]

My favorite places is my grandmother' s house.

My favorite places is my grandmother' s house, because the house is so silent. My grandmother' s house is in hill, so there are not many cars and shops in near the house. And there are not many lights, so it is so dark night.

I always sleep and lie around at the house, so I am so happy. And when I stay the house, I do not worry time. Also I like my grandmother, so I want to go there many times.

[83 words]

My favorite place is my room.

My favorite place is my room, because I can relax so much. My room is so small, but I like small place and I am small. So I think my room is comfortable. My room is not much furniture, because I do not like to put many furniture. And I do not like to litter the room, so I always clean up my room.

But there are many soft toys in my room. My favorite soft toys are a shellie May and Duffy, so I always sleep with them. I can sleep to so relax.

[95 words]