Wednesday, May 21, 2014

Essay 1-02a: University life

The best places to eat are the bakery, LAWSON, and the cafeteria in this University. Their shop' s foods so good taste, so they are so popular to many students. Also, many students often talk with their friends, so there are many smiles in their places.

And, some of students can become a exchange student' s tutor. The tutor teaches a exchange student Japanese and can study English together. If students become a tutor, they can talk and communicate many exchange students. Also students can teach them Japanese tradition. So students become to enjoy for their school life and can be an English.

And, there is a big library in this University. The library so good, because there are many books and study places in the library. So some of students often use and study there.

So this University is so convenient, and there are dreams in the University. Some of students will be able to find many dreams!

[159 words]

5 comments:

  1. Hi Seina,

    This essay should be at least as long as your free-writing (essay prep.) post, shouldn't it? How about adding info. about various classes offered for 1st, 2nd, 3rd, and 4th year students, including those interested in becoming teachers.

    Cheers, PB

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  2. I can see that there are many convenience places! Where do you like at most Bakery, LAWSON or cafeteria? Nice Essay!

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    1. Thank you for commenting this post! I like the bakery the best in the three places, because many breads taste is sooo good.

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  3. I like your expression 'there are dreams in the University'.
    I think there are many smiles too.
    Which place do you like best, bakery, LAWSON or cafeteria?

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    1. Thank you, Satoko! I like the title, too. I like the bakery the best, many breads taste are so good.

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