"My story was better!", said three kids.
Review
This story' s main characters are Spider and Sam, Lolly. They wanted to built their a swell tree house, so they decided to built it. But Lolly did not help to built it, so Spider and Sam built it. Lolly slept during they built it. When Lolly woke up the tree house was finished, and she said, "I' ll be right up." But Sam and Spider said, "no! You did not help." So Lolly said, "I know some good stories." Lolly was up the tree, and she began to tell a good story. The story was about a doll and a chicken got lost, and they encounter a monster. They ran away, finally the monster said to want to tie his new shoes. "Not much of a story", Spider said. So Spider tell a good story. His story was about a fox stole a chicken' s grocery bag and run away, but there are many worms in the bag. Sam' s story was about a monster stole much money from a doll and a chicken. After then, the monster had many ice cream as reward. They called that own story is the best ever.
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Refence
James Marshall. (1986). THREE UP A TREE. New York, the United States of America. the Penguin Group Penguin Books.
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